First time I see the thing and the first time I notice is the speeling erreurs. May want to get someone to proofread, because that sort of annoyance detracts from enjoying the story.
Second Panel: there shouldn’t be an apostrophe in It’s (this is one of the only times we leave out apostrophes when showing possession)
Last Panel: again there shouldn’t be an apostrophe in Bloodling’s, I guess that one was just a typo?
First time I see the thing and the first time I notice is the speeling erreurs. May want to get someone to proofread, because that sort of annoyance detracts from enjoying the story.
What spelling errors did I miss?
Second Panel: there shouldn’t be an apostrophe in It’s (this is one of the only times we leave out apostrophes when showing possession)
Last Panel: again there shouldn’t be an apostrophe in Bloodling’s, I guess that one was just a typo?
It’s instead of its, I’m guessing